...Just Walk The Path Of Life With Me.... Poem by Little Sunshine
...Just Walk The Path Of Life With Me....
Every morning just wanna wake up by your voice whispering sweet love words to me
Then wanna open my eyes by your gentle hands, brushing my hair and face
opening my eyes, to see the magic of these bright brown eyes
But what I want is completely different from reality
I know and you know that too
this is something far from happening
I asked you to love me and never leave me
in return you said just walk the path of life with me
But what we are living in now is not life
We are living in dreams
Some day we will be awaken
Then we have to leave these dreams
February 15,2009
oh really some times we live great moments and amazing time put it soo sad to know that u r just dreaming. for that i always hope i don't wake up just to save the dreams... i said that once time in a poem of mine 'dreams must never broken ' Timon Cheers
hope dream comes true....... nice poem........brilliant write.10 from lago
lovely short poem, but not for pro poets like me, but for ordinary lovers of poetry, put more effort.
as you know we have to look at eyes of life not dreams.DREAMS SWALLOW poor lifes
you know something i feel like poem talks to any one wh reads it and the dream you talk about is great way you expressed you deserve ten 10+
keep that dream and go on dreaming..and wake up with that dream and you'll find out how lovely is the dream is...nice concept...10
ABSOLUTELY CORRECT....................hope.....soon your dreams will not be only a dream..... ill pray, it will be played in reality....this poem is clear, .....nice to read..... naizz
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 9:38:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I loved this piece..