Just To Say Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Just To Say

Rating: 5.0


I hate you
for invading my clandestine world
where I peacefully dwelt

I hate you
for awakening me
from my levithian sleep.

I hate you
for showing that I am special
which let my other senses exist.

I hate you
for teaching me to miss you
which breaks my heart into two.

Because I know...
I'll never be yours nor will you be mine
in this kaleidoscopic world with this
kamikaze love.

8th May 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Cannon 08 July 2008

Full of the passion of its genesis.

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Bill Thomas 10 July 2008

Been there; felt that; couldn't put it as well as you have. Thank you!

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Dee Daffodil 10 July 2008

Where there's a will...there's a way...no? Nicely written! Hugs, Dee

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

Its difficult for me to imagine this hate. I have not experienced it. Anyways good imignation and hope its not true but only fiction.

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Afzal Shauq 24 June 2009

Because I know... I'll never be yours nor will you be mine in this kaleidoscopic world with this kamikaze love you are right nogh to say that, non has love in heart for other... sure its generlized and known... but when love is respects based... the feelings never loose their heartiest attachments...I believe for the love on global based and say..the the love based peace can make the global life safe and sound... or let me share with you one of my famous say with you regarding love/peace...(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) .... yes you are right love has gone to the wind and there is no ties of love any more... but still there some ways which can be bridge up with humane ties... good poet, you deserve to be called best..10+++++++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008

'I hate you for teaching me to miss you' wonderfull! ! impressive! ! ++10

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Chris Mendros 17 August 2008

This is an emotionally strong poem examining the double-edged sword that love can be. Impressive.

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Chris Vanbrusselen 17 July 2008

I THINK SHARMA'S CLOSER TO THE TRUTH. I THINK WITH DUE RESPECT THAT SHINA'S WRONG.BUT, YOU AS WELLAS ME, WE REPEAT OURSELVES, LOVE AGAIN! CHRIS.I KNOW.LOVE IS IMPORTANT.EVEN WHEN IT BREAKS YOUR HEART APART.

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C. P. Sharma 13 July 2008

Awesome poem and very well composed. Your hate is the love gone full circle when one loses the sense of otherness and the two become ONE. Even the thought of otherness is intolerable.

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