Just One More? Poem by Mckenzi Lew

Just One More?



so, yeah you say you love me but how do i know its real?
because you've said it to other girls but you forgot to 'seal the deal'
am i gonna be the next one to go or am i gonna stay a while?
do you even mean it when you say, 'baby, i love you and you make me smile? '
a lot of questions, i know. but i need an answer soon
i dont wanna sit around all day to wait on you.
so decide real quick, before i hit the door -
do you really love me?
or am i just one more?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 07 April 2008

I love the intenisty in this and the accusing tone; it makes it a powerful read. nice job! :)

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Shalayna Kay 24 February 2008

you said it very well! && yes every guy should know this! i love all your poems.!

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Mandy MMR 13 February 2008

amazing! i love the bluntness of it... this is something every guy should know!

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Vision Ghost 12 February 2008

A very simple sentiment is delivered here, so much so that it reminds one that sometimes the basics of love and relationships is constantly over looked. I feel somewhat your a wise cookie. Stay that way.

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