Just Now Poem by Neela Nath Das

Just Now

Rating: 5.0


Just now I have seen you
in orange jacket,
writing poems
in the attic.
The cool breeze's
soothing your head
and disease could not
make you sick.
You are there
and the rumor
stirred my mind.
I condemn the guy
who wants your illness
from your behind!
If the sickness
is from the waves
of tiring day,
take rest and
get well soon,
I shall pray!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 October 2013

Lovely poem sickness of mind due to something stuck up when clear no sickness may be like this as we feel than

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 October 2013

Sickness caused from natural causes is cured with rest. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 06 October 2013

When the sunny day tried to win over the land, the storm comes harshly to take over them...a sick for love, a bad romance maybe...but again i see...life is so competitive but true love will cure all miseries_SOul

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