Just Look Behind Poem by Aftab Alam

Just Look Behind

Rating: 4.9


Should I tell what hid in my mind?
Or let It be as it is, Why to find?
Ya, you don’t have time, just remind
Desirous move ahead, look behind

Can you trace back your path?
Or will you ditch down into wrath?
Think not about the life, its legend
‘Tis easy to climb than the descend

I can watch the entire gimmick
Of the day through the night
I know the actual mimic
Through inner lovely sight

Though a tree tall and gigantic
Yet it never hates the earth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2013

I like thi sonnet, thanks. never hate.

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David Wood 20 June 2013

A nice sonnet Aftab well written.

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

We all like to go forward and climb great heights! Even when we have reached the summit it is necessary for us to look down once in a while to trace the route through which we travelled! We shouldn't forget our roots! A highly philosophical poem! Enjoyed!

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Hazel Durham 22 June 2013

Hate destroys mankind, when we love we grow into good, creative and happy people!

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

I know the actual mimic through inner lovely sight.

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Farah Ilyas 21 June 2013

‘Tis easy to climb than the descend...yeap agree with u, we should step forward by keeping in mind past behind..good message delivered by you...keep writing

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Unwritten Soul 20 June 2013

Different... yes i agree..look behind but dont forget turn in front or we put self in troubles...we need side mirrors! _SOul

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