&just How Much You Mean To Me 3& Poem by Elizabeth Tyease Collins

&just How Much You Mean To Me 3&

Rating: 2.3


Maybe it's just me but I need your breath upon my skin.
I guess weird to say but you simply complete me.
You simply care so much as to have thought of me.
Your love overpowers every ounce of negativity in the world,
you are the perfect little person in this big non perfect world,
and I'm such a lucky girl to be with someone like you,
to hold someone so cool,
to caress someone so true.

So no matter how many times your friends claim to say
that us being together won't work because we're so far away,
just know that my heart is always in your hands,
so I trust you at every thought in your head,
every time you hold my heart so safe in bed,
how your eyes flutter closed and you seem to drift off
to netherland,
I'll be there in spirit,
with my heart by your side,
as your lucky girl with a golden mind.
I love you and and there's no one I'd rather love more,
than you my Lovie,
whom I'll always adore =]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*_sakura ~daisy_* 24 September 2009

I see and feel exactly where you're coming from.......love is a wonderful thing....cherish the one you love always................................................

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Emily Harris 15 September 2009

Very Good, i can totally understand what your saying, Awesomee (:

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 22 April 2009

Dear TYEASE, It's agood dedicated love poem where romance is flowing free.youb are bold and holding on to your stand which seldom people of your age usually holds.Iliked it.You deserve A-8-from me-Rajkumar NEVER SAY 'WOULD YOU MIND' COZ WE ARE IN A POET'S FORUM

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 April 2009

Very powerful and loving words. This is one of the most romantic things I have read through and through. From the beginning to the end, It was special. I also like the way it was presented. Love and sincerety help a writer do that. GW62

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djean Whitney 21 April 2009

I love it! ! ! This reminds me of a poem I wrote about a guy I one's liked a lot and he will never know my feelings for hime I have with in. This person is luky to have someone like you thats willing to put their feelings on the line. -Great job!

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