Just For Fun.... Poem by Jake Deeds

Just For Fun....

Rating: 4.5


The old grey goose no longer sings

As he falls from grace and flings his wings

And flings his wings to no avail

Shaking and shuttering, his tail sets sail

And as he fell the gander thought it neat

...To watch the old squacker loose his feet

His severed feet then hit his bill

She loudly cackled as he took his spill

All that was left then hit a willow

And now the old grey goose resides in my pillow....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 09 January 2016

There is a soft metaphor in this poem good

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Anthony Burge 07 April 2013

Down, down feather down. Nice work.

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C.R. Clark 25 July 2011

A very humorous poem. The old grey goose found practical use. Thanks for the chuckle. Richard

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Vanessa Hughes 19 June 2011

That poor goose, though it made me chuckle. Enjoyed it Nessy x

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