Just Ease Poem by lady grace

Just Ease

Rating: 5.0


he hears when you call
from the first morning light
he hears your voice
a hero from victorious fight...

in a battle where knights come with swords
you're among of those who comes late
yours is not to fight but to write
the unending claims of historical rights...

a man in black sat on his chair
to balance the figure of both the arm and the chair
who are you to judge? ...who wants to dare?
both were given a chance to be fair..

let justice be a friend

let it live in your heart

let no subordinates be faked

for their superior's sake..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 29 June 2009

let their subordinates never suffer........ fantastic write.........

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2009

There's a nice balance to this wonderfully penned piece my friend...you have done well....and the justice proud...10

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nice read.. i like how it read..

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Lacie Wasserman 29 June 2009

:) Very good I love how it sounds and the way you say it makes you think. Thumbs up from me! Keep writing.

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Carl Harris 29 June 2009

An interesting and well written poem, Lady Grace. I enjoyed reading it. Carl.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2009

let justice be a friend let it live in your heart let no subordinates be faked for their superior's sake..............let there be no discrimiationfor their worthshow on the field......very good narration inthr for m of tale.....10 rad mine disparity

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Lily Law 13 July 2009

a poem that tells story... nice work! ! ! =]

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Duh Huh 13 July 2009

I like how you started the story with a historical feel and brought it to the present with skill full creativity. Thank you for sharing :)

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Ron Flowers 04 July 2009

A very good poem. Ron

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I really enjoyed the story behind it and i love the way you write. It's simple yet powerful. Im still trying to write that way. Anyways, this poem rocks, i mean it was really great! ~Izzzzzy~

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