Just Beyond 'Me'. Poem by Fay Slimm
Just Beyond 'Me'.
Outside of self a world awaits
For love signs. - I want to see
Just beyond 'me', then can create
An easier day for other
Than ' I '. - Reaching out may abate
Hurt or fear, can dry other eyes
Than mine. Aiding weak hope placates
Depressed mind, and words of kindness
Can overturn mood, so, taking
Initiative I'll make a start. - - -
Helping other than ' I ' feels great.
Just beyond ' me ' is a challenge
Which demands much, and is waiting.
kind, considerate writ.... and right.. this is
I liked this phrase.. 'Just beyond ' me ' is a challenge Which demands much, and is waiting' well cant say i really liked it, cause i m still 21 and feels afraid when i see the challenges that lies ahead in life nice one
This splendid poem is a wonderful reminder of the old golden rule, Fay, 'Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.' It is far more personally rewarding to help a friend, or even a stranger, deal with the pains of life or reversals of fortune regarding love or happiness. Giving that kind word, a pat on the back, or a hand in friendship, accomplishes so much not only for the one helped, but for you, the giver of love and friendship and good cheer! Carl.
going beyond you is the greatest favour to the me too...but it would resist to leave you to...great poem
As always Fay you hit the nail on the head...helping others is much more rewarding than helping yourself...beautful poetry...Fi...10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 12:47:58 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A very well written verse here Fay...to help others..is very good in the 'feel good' factor...always nice for the same to be returned...10++ Sue