Ellirie Aviles


Just As I Felt - Poem by Ellirie Aviles

How infuriating was it?
It consumed your patience fast
How wrong was what I did?
To do that - was a must!

For whatever bitterness felt
or pain sown in person's bosom
To time, your candle melt
'twas a way to see the phantom

That-A thought no keen could build
through fantasy nor absurdity.
Yet hath risks that could get me killed
to feel as I felt solves the mystery.


Comments about Just As I Felt by Ellirie Aviles

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (2/9/2014 6:08:00 AM)

    fantasy not absurdity, good writing, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 10, 2014


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