Just Another Day Poem by Hazel Durham

Just Another Day

Rating: 4.4


Just another day, when my heart sings with the sweetness,
Of endless loving things,
Souls intertwined and locked, as deep as the Grand Canyon,
Please don't mock,
Our world is rich, vivid with colours blending smoothly,
On a artists palette,
Pictures of a couple, in bloom midway through life,
A long way yet, from the sanctuary of our tomb,
Honesty binding us like sheaves of hay,
In ever sunshine fields of may,
Life is a roller-coaster, with no shady deals,
Memories deleted, as we focus on our passionate reckless abandonment,
With dreams of a humble abode, with no foe's, just your loving doe,
Just another day, even when strong winds blow,
When i see your splendid face,
I can challenge this life, at any pace,
My man is full of spirit and fun, he is more than a king,
Pat is an ace,
Just another day, when together, we will win life's enduring race.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is inspired by my wonderful partner Pat.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 15 October 2012

My man is full of spirit and fun, he is more than a king, Pat is an ace, grand write. accept my votes too. keep it up my frnd.

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

Lovely write Hazel, very expressive.

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Aung Si 18 October 2012

Our world is rich, vivid with colours blending smoothly, Honesty binding us like sheaves of hay, So powerful with this sort of verses.Btw; he is more than a king, really?

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 October 2012

the words chosen to write this poem make this poem wonderful! Nice!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 October 2012

your heart print, thanks for sharing

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2013

to search for a love is a great thing in world if supported by your optimistic feelings...nice poem

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woooooooooow that's an amazing poem Hazel WELL DONE

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You ar a great writer hazel, keep writing1

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Kanav Justa 09 December 2012

written straight from the heart, , , , , nicee

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Owain Glyn 21 November 2012

I have just read two of your pieces, both dedicated to those close to you and both shining with Love, I shall look at some more

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