Hazel Durham

Just Another Day - Poem by Hazel Durham

Just another day, when my heart sings with the sweetness,
Of endless loving things,
Souls intertwined and locked, as deep as the Grand Canyon,
Please don't mock,
Our world is rich, vivid with colours blending smoothly,
On a artists palette,
Pictures of a couple, in bloom midway through life,
A long way yet, from the sanctuary of our tomb,
Honesty binding us like sheaves of hay,
In ever sunshine fields of may,
Life is a roller-coaster, with no shady deals,
Memories deleted, as we focus on our passionate reckless abandonment,
With dreams of a humble abode, with no foe's, just your loving doe,
Just another day, even when strong winds blow,
When i see your splendid face,
I can challenge this life, at any pace,
My man is full of spirit and fun, he is more than a king,
Pat is an ace,
Just another day, when together, we will win life's enduring race.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is inspired by my wonderful partner Pat.

Comments about Just Another Day by Hazel Durham

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/12/2013 2:32:00 PM)

    to search for a love is a great thing in world if supported by your optimistic feelings...nice poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 101 Points Novoti Gcisakazi Calpurnia Jiya (4/21/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    woooooooooow that's an amazing poem Hazel WELL DONE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (12/10/2012 3:25:00 PM)

    You ar a great writer hazel, keep writing1 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (12/9/2012 4:24:00 AM)

    written straight from the heart, , , , , nicee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Owain Glyn (11/21/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    I have just read two of your pieces, both dedicated to those close to you and both shining with Love, I shall look at some more (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Marcus Mckinley (11/19/2012 11:08:00 AM)

    eternity can be conquered together with a lifetime of love. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 167 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/2/2012 10:02:00 PM)

    your choice of words convey the message nicely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Kevin East (11/1/2012 5:49:00 AM)

    Romantic with great imagery.
    Your words link like the petals of a flower...superb[again]. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (10/22/2012 3:21:00 PM)

    To find true love is the best thing in the world.
    A fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/22/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    I like your optimistic way of thinking. A wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (10/20/2012 9:10:00 PM)

    This is beautiful! Such cheerful way of looking at life and things! We get a boost on reading it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (10/19/2012 10:23:00 AM)

    your heart print, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,727 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/19/2012 7:07:00 AM)

    the words chosen to write this poem make this poem wonderful! Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/18/2012 11:25:00 PM)

    Our world is rich, vivid with colours blending smoothly,
    Honesty binding us like sheaves of hay,
    So powerful with this sort of verses.Btw; he is more than a king, really? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (10/15/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    Lovely write Hazel, very expressive. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (10/15/2012 5:07:00 AM)

    My man is full of spirit and fun, he is more than a king,
    Pat is an ace, grand write. accept my votes too. keep it up my frnd. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rick Elpers (10/14/2012 10:54:00 AM)

    Hazel, this is such a hopeful write to those who have not achieved such splendor in a relation with another.
    The idea that you can persevere life with someone by your side as you describe is the ideal! ! !
    Thank you for giving us a glimps into your heart. Pat is a very lucky fellow indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/14/2012 6:25:00 AM)

    I actually admird yor take on d grand canyon! Superb rhymin throughout too! Liked how u say lovin doe. And true ordinary men can b kingly. My votes accept. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 13, 2012

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