Just A Tast Of That Christen Milk, , ,93 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Just A Tast Of That Christen Milk, , ,93

Rating: 5.0


JUST a tast of that christen milk,
a glimpse of that tiny speck of
hope, hiding in the dark clouds
above.
JUST a tast of that christen milk,
let it hit my body, my eyes, then
send me flying in mid air.
JUST a tast.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

DAVID...YOU'RE BEGINNING TO MAKE MY ABSTRACT APPEAR TRADITIONAL ...UNIQUE WRITE...BEAM ME UP ON THIS ONE....I'M SURE ITS A GLITCH OF MY MIND AS OPPOSED TO YOUR WORDS...BUT YA GOT ME MUSIN' TOO HARD ON THIS BABY....10 FOR UNIQUITY''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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***** ********* 01 November 2005

No spell check either? 10 from me. Tai

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