Just A Sniff Poem by Scarborough Gypsy

Just A Sniff

Rating: 3.8


Sometimes I get just a sniff
A whiff of a memory
A time or a place
Of people
A Face
I might be reminded
Of a moment gone by
By a song
Or a sound
Just the feeling around
It might be the taste
Of some food or a wine
Hearing distant laughter
Or a car going by
It could be a picture
Or the tone of a voice
Like a cool gentle breeze
And my eyes become moist
Sometimes just a sniff
A whiff of a day
Is all that I need
And I feel OK
For today are the memories
I’ll have tomorrow
There’ll be more joy
And a lot less sorrow
A sniff of the days
That have long since past
Will always be there
And will last
And so if I seem
A little displaced
When my eyes have glazed over
And I stare into space
It’s not that I’m sad
Or thinking “What if”?
I really am fine
It’s just a sniff.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter A. Crowther 21 March 2005

Very good. It encapsulates that sense of deja vu that we all experience from time to time.

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Linda Preston 25 March 2005

Scarborough Gypsy has a certain gentility about her poetry, that reminds me of the English Lake poets. Nicely told tale

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Lilian Marriage 29 March 2005

Many people should be able to relate to this poem, not only because of experiencing 'homesickness' but because of the 'ageing' process that we all hope to go through. I like this.

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Sylvia Spencer 04 April 2005

A poem with so much meaning. I know how you feel, when we moved from London to Norfolk. I was like a fish out of water for at least a year, but now sixteen years later. I would not change it for the world. lovely poem cheers sylvia

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Sylvia Spencer 04 April 2005

A poem with so much meaning. I know how you feel, when we moved from London to Norfolk. I was like a fish out of water for at least a year, but now sixteen years later. I would not change it for the world. lovely poem cheers sylvia

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Michael Gale 09 August 2006

Yes, loneliness can seem like an alienation of the heart and soul of an individual. Great piece of work here. God bless-MJG.

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Brian Dorn 29 March 2006

I can so relate to this... I get that feeling all the time! Wonderful poem! Brian

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Scarlett Treat 08 February 2006

Once, I moved a thousand miles from home, and, when I left my train, if I hadn't seem my older brother approaching, I would have gotten on the next train home. But he was 'home' for me, and safety...Bless older bros, and thank you for reminding us what that feeling of separation feel like. Scarlett

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Duncan Wyllie 05 February 2006

So real, the feeling in this, we can touch it.Brilliant Love Duncan

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A Friend 27 July 2005

You didn't have to be on your own.............................

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