Just A Small One Poem by Martin O'Neill

pretty much... and sadly, becomes a form of slavery. good poem.

ALCOHOL IN CHARGE OF YOU.......VERY SAD AND THE SITUATION IS VERY GLOOM, THE POEM IS VERY LITTLE BUT VERY POWERFUL WITH GOOD IMPACT, I LIKE THE POEM AND I LIKE YOU TO READ MY NEW POEMS ALSO.

Though small, this is powerful and succinct. Fine job.

Short and succinct, speaks its mind without exaggeration. An excellent penning.

Powerful little poem! just beautiful!

A clever twist of fate (so to speak) initially we taste revolting alcohol to keep up with others, then enjoy ourselves and then (when I say we I mean me) then when I lost a loved one for nearly six months it was ic. Luckily I knew it was no good for me and now it's just once a week. Great write to ponder... Ty Karen

An astute observation in a succinct poem. Good one.