Just A Pet Rant Of Mine Poem by Debora Short

Just A Pet Rant Of Mine

Rating: 2.5


Specifics
Would include
Much more homework
To be placed near
Grocery
Check outs
Off with
Mindless
People
National Enquirer
Pretty Homes, etc.
In place, add
National Geographic
Smithsonian
Scientific American
American Scientist
Artist, Etc.
Promote ~ Lifelong Learning
To adults
Kids
Eating and drinking
Habits
Are learned at home! ! !

(A Rocket Scientist's Mom, Tennessee
~ 14 September,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 15 September 2006

Excellent poem Debora, Loved it Good emotion.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 September 2006

deb...Welcome to Utopia for Moms? Love the cut-phrase pattern that is utelized throughout...kind of like a segment of 5 minutes inside the Mind of a concerned & loving pareny, , , thoughts organized, some mere wishes, but rapid in motion & almost brain-wracking....Superb work, Debora! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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