Gold Star - 6,939 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Just A Minute - Poem by SALINI NAIR

A lovely meadow under the sky
Clouds chatter at its turn
Some yak for awhile or more
But rest of them is in a queue
Greenery is fenced in an array
But the clouds are on a long way
There a pool wonders at its warmth
Draw the sky to its face
Then peep to its eyes in marvel
But the sky was in a hurry
It flew to the next charm…..

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Topic(s) of this poem: natural

Comments about Just A Minute by SALINI NAIR

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2014 1:16:00 PM)

    Wonderful lines.....Just loved reading it.
    But the sky was in a hurry
    It flew to the next charm…..
    I loved the description of nature, you have portrayed it well. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 518 Points Sanjibsaha Aniketa (8/5/2014 7:48:00 AM)

    'the sky was in a hurry'- Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,309 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/5/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    Beutiful sights are for a while only, how short is the life of a rose flower and handsome men rarely enjoy a long life. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,694 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/5/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    Simply beautiful.......Some aspects of Nature's beauty very well described....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 5, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 5, 2014

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