Just A Child Poem by Hermione Femalton

Just A Child

Rating: 5.0


Her face is cut and dirty,
Her clothes are ripped and torn,
She sheltered under door-ways;
Weary and forlorn.

Her fragile soul is broken
By her abusive past,
She's the kind of child
That grew up way too fast.

Her father, always drunk,
Her mother didn't care;
And when her father beat her,
Mummy wasn't there.

Her father drunk their money,
Her mother went quite wild.
She shouldn't have to cope with this;
She's only just a child.

October 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
cj jeggo 11 January 2009

Its sad; but true. you are really good and i love reading all your peoms. i like the way you ryme most of them and you can read them with a swing. =]

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Lindsey Ashton 30 December 2008

this is sad but true, nice write, i was quite getting into it, good rhyming and bounce, i just wanted it to be a little longer, but a definate 10

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