Just Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Just

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This heart is a leaf,
Upon which you spread
Like a color
Young, you keep me
Green, adorable and very
Much presentable
Old, you desert me
Giving a pale brown,
The color of soil

@ Anil Kumar Panda 18/11/2015

Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 19 November 2015

I love your poem Tiku. Even though the leaf is likened to man being deserted by love in it's prime the leaf contains the most glorious autumn colors. By eventually assuming the color of the earth the leaf becomes whole as part and parcel of the richness of it's creator.....10

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