Jungle Friendships Poem by me poet yeps poet

Jungle Friendships

Rating: 4.5


Seek not friendship
of a tree in a forest
there are so many
the next time you pass

the same lane
you wouldn't know
which tree came

and
smiled back at you

did you me woo
for friendship

I wish you knew
there are a million trees like me
which kind are you
will you tell me true

all trees lovers come and go
place hands on bare skin
to their love show
then they simply go
are you not one
like the same one
I said so
now you may also go

the forest is about to ablaze
friend you are now
in a poet's maze!

Sunday, August 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,love and friendship,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 28 August 2016

I like this one at least. Lost in the maze of the second last verse; but there's worse.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 August 2016

kindness

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 August 2016

you are free to comment with full freedom whether you like my poetry or NOT DOESN'T MATTER MUCH as such but be truthful as much

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