June Thirteenth Poem by Ivan Donn Carswell

June Thirteenth



If I didn’t mark this day in passing
if I didn’t make this date a part of
solid History I’d fail – a day to fix in
memory and memory will prevail

June thirteenth, Gemini of Mercury
an element of Air – where hunger
for awareness rests, your love
therein is seen a proper reckoning

Measure of your length and breadth
despairs dimensions of your ardent
heart – cathedral blessed, especially
in loving – sets your warmth apart

I know and love your being as a
comforting, liberty from loneliness
of empty rooms, a candle light of
passage gleam safely leading home

Blessed I am to know you well for all
these humble years, your inspiration
wills me write of you – and I shall ‘til
Lethe waters still my trembling hand
© 8 June 2009, I. D. Carswell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 10 July 2009

Stunning work Ivan. Brilliantly crafted, skilfully composed. HG: -) xx

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Jim Hogg 25 June 2009

Amen to the Metamorphhhic comment. Skillfully charged with heart. Hope life is good for you and yours Ivan.

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Simply beautiful, Ivan.

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