Jumper Poem by Hugh Cobb

Jumper

Rating: 4.5


Standing on a ledge ten stories up
wind rips at clothing & flesh,
a tiger's claws. Hair blown to hell.
None of it matters at all.
Nothing matters but the hundred feet below
& a tiny patch of concrete
soon to be filled with blood & brains &
the crushed shell of a depressed life.
One last look out, then down.
Thighs compress for launch:
a three second freefall into salvation.

(Copyright 3/1/2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna Russell 06 March 2006

Hugh, I don't think you're capable of writing a bad poem! This is powerful stuff, never shying away from truth, no matter how ugly - and all the more potent for it. I think all of us can relate to this on some level - even if we don't want to admit it. Hugs Anna xxx

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Simply brilliant. Punchy rhythm. Horrific content perfectlly captured and expressed as if blase.

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kskdnj sajn 02 March 2006

Yes...well done Hugh.

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chilling rendering of 'before-the-moment.' intense.

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