Judgment Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Judgment

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Judgment is given by a judge in human society,
Justice some get and some don’t in life reality.
Judge decides the cases depending upon witness,
Justiciary justifies and convicts a person in blindness.

Jealousy brings always violence and leads to crime,
Jails doors wait for convicts who loss valuable time.
Jeer does come from people and they dislike them,
Jaunting is absent from them they get always blem.

Jiggered the convicts are, they swindle to be good,
Jurists can't punish though they are in right mood.
Justifiably they are punished in the court of God,
Justice of the peace he is, he is the supreme Lord.

Judgment is made through Karma or action,
Junior or senior are punished here without friction.
Jewel you should be, noble work should be done,
Jeweler is the God, he never let’s good gone.

Jest you ought not take, meditate to God,
Jaunty life you please lead be a flower bud.
Judgment is depend upon you if you do good,
Jejune attitude will be vanished you have no hood.

Thursday, July 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: social,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the Poem
Poet here discriminates the judgment of a justifier and the Lord above. A judge gives judgment on the basis of witness and plea of an advocate. Some get justice where as some do not. A judge is wise and expert in law still than he convicts a person blindly in some cases. Jealousy always brings violence and leads to crime. So one should be away from this and should avoid the door of jail and the bad remark of the people. Jealous persons miss jaunting. Convicted persons try to swindle and become confounded. A judge though in right mood can never punish them due to the remarks of witness. But he or she must be punished in the court of God as per his or her karma or action. Poet says, ” You should be a jewel and be noble. God is best jeweler. You should not have any jest. You must meditate God. You should be cheerful and self confident. If you do well you will get good judgment and no foe or gangster will arise.” This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Jeer - jeering remarks
Jaunting - cheerful and self confidence
Jiggered - confounded
Jest - benter
Jejune - unsatisfying to the mind, Hood - gangster
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 11 July 2015

A court to condemn A court to sentence A court to justify Is above of all courts on earth

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 July 2015

all lines with j as starting, the matter has been put across well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 July 2015

Jealousy brings always violence with the ways of mankind. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 09 July 2015

An insightful poem, Kumarmani. Justice systems on earth are severely flawed

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 July 2015

Truly, the worldly judge may fail but the universal judge never fails, so, one must be good in the view of the Apex Judge.

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Valsa George 04 December 2019

The guilty should be punished and the innocent should be granted justice. Unfortunately in man's court of justice, the real convict may sometimes escape and the innocent may be charged of crime. But in God's court of justice, fair judgement alone awaits! A great poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 November 2019

The divine justice system is automatic. There is no judge as such. He only had devised the system and the system works automatically without any outside intervention, and so is perfect. The judicial system in the world suffer in comparison. How true!

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Decision making has right and nice effect in mind. We should focus on judgement. A nice feeling is shared with beauty of joy. An interesting sharing is done really.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.......excellent write...the imagery of jewel is beautiful, and a nice metaphor...thank you for sharing ★ 9 Jul 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Scott Hemingway xThank-you India. 9 Jul 2015 by Scott Hemingway | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xInteresting ink...tfs sometimes we ourselves are our own worst judge of ourselves, , , amen God is so loving and forgiving xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings darling 9 Jul 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Scott Hemingway xAmen! 9 Jul 2015 by Scott Hemingway picture of Nishu Mathur xPowerful and a very nicely constructed poem. 9 Jul 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Drake Banner xReally puts a message out there! Gw! 9 Jul 2015 by Drake Banner | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xgood imagery and content, though you spelled judgement incorrectly 10 Jul 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Kumarmani Mahakul xThank you dear Vaillancourt for your comment but the spelling of judgment is judgement too as per the Oxford Dictionary, both are correct. 11 Jul 2015 by Kumarmani Mahakul | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. 11 Jul 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xI particularly liked the line about karma.....your words are always wise and written with flair and creativity! 14 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xYou have a true talent Sir. 4 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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Ramesh Rai 20 July 2015

Unique and beautiful articulation with outstanding thought. Thanks for sharing

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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