Joyriding Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Joyriding

Rating: 5.0


She goes with her new lover.
An unpopular actor
in a red colored racing car.
On the way the police halted them
as it's a stolen car.
The girl still feels it's a movie
until they are taken for custody.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 12 September 2006

Enjoyed the 'reality check' in this one Nimal, an experience we all have eventually.... regardless of the activity.

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Sandra Fowler 12 September 2006

Colorful imagery in this one. These two joyriders are definately headed for a crash The dream has ended and reality has begun. Very original.Nimal. Regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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