! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Joy- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Joy- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.5


Child slips tender feet,
into new first pair of shoes;
Smiles and runs- squeak, sqeak...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjit Ravindran 26 December 2009

Shoes with whistle, I still remember, Guarded my feet like a squeaking armour; Every step was applauded with a squeak, And invited kisses to be planted on my cheek.

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Raj Nandy 25 December 2009

YOU HAVE PUT IT ACROSS VERY WELL POETICALLY! THIS IS ALL THE TIME HAPPENING AROUND ME IN OUR SOCIETY! -Raj

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 December 2009

a wonderful senryu...this joy catches on

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 December 2009

a wonderful senryu mam...this joy catches on

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