Commit Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Commit

Rating: 5.0


There is a common bond here
FEELINGS, that we bare
The journey may be different
A dream, a wish, a prayer
But when it all comes down to IT
The truth is, it's hard to commit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda May Moore 30 June 2007

I like this poem. There is a trick to commit though, and that is called love. :)

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David Harris 23 May 2007

JoAnn, one word to answer Commit with and that is Yes. Agree with everything you say. Top Marks and thank you for sharing. David

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Amy C 22 March 2007

wow. thats amazing. im a commitment phobe lol. really nice write! xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 March 2007

A poet, bares his or her soul for the whole world to see and feels no shame because a poet always speaks the inner truth... JoJo...10

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