Journey(Punctuation Poem-13 Lines) Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Journey(Punctuation Poem-13 Lines)

- - - - - -: - -, - -, - -,

- - - + - - - + - - -

- -; - - - - - -? - - -

- - + - +? ? ?

- - - - - - - - - - _ _ _ _ _

! ! ! ! ! ? ? ! ! ! ! - - - - -!

(?) (?) - - - - - - -? ? (?)

? ? (?) / - -/? ? (!)

? ? ? +! ! ! / - - -

(?) / (!) =; ?

? ! + (?) +; ! ? + (!) + /

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- - - - - - - - - - -

(About this poem)
1st line - dash means traveling and quest for life
Colon means what and where to quest
Comma means what the things are like to quest
2nd line means traveling all the way
Plus means many things to do in journey
3rd line – Semicolon means “but or little confusion then questioning the Self in journey
4th line, he tries many things but asking himself
5th line, travelling then he rest for while or space with himself
6th line with exclamation means get mad for his/her quest
7th line, parenthesis means Strong or almost insane questioning about his journey
8th,9th,10th,11th line are mix emotions of himself
Slash means divided heart or mind thinking, listening to his mind and heart to answer his journey
12th line, he completely Stop- it means he knows where to go the, knows where and what direction to quest in his life
Then 13th line or last line, he travels again in journey but with calmness, peace and have a good purpose in life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2015

Your poem ' Journey(Punctuation Poem-13 Lines) ' creates an enthusiastic attitude in my mind. I have never seen such type of poem before. Punctuation enwraps many things and feeling behind it. Well done my dear Herbert, go ahead for better success. May God bless you and your family.

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Thank you so much for supporting this poem. Thank you for your deep understanding.

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