~~journey~~ Poem by Raju Baruah
~~journey~~
I am in the middle of my journey
With the heavy basket behind
full with have and haven't
Can't wait
Can't go back
Can't untie the tag
Just running
Through this ordeal of chaos
Through the mist of faith
To reach the unknown end of distress.
(c) raju baruah'2010
Yes very true u need to leave sorrows behind and walk ahead. good one.
Have and have'nt can't go. Never would'nt I! . A nice one', keep it up.
Have and have'nt can't go. Never would'nt I! . A nice one', keep it up.
Can't untie the tag Just running Through this ordeal of chaos Through the mist of faith To reach the unknown end of distress. ........ well poet your cry is too loud. we are also in the same journey poet. stand straight and face all the hazards of life as a man who can touch the cry of others. Write more poet, Live long
journey without the bag of have and have nots is a futile one..its the chaos and ordeal which keep us on our toes to reach a non existing state of rest thats without chaos.. nicely framed! !
‘Chaos’ and ‘Mist of Faith’…a poetically pessimistic/optimistic attitude…what poets always are… ‘…To reach the unknown end of distress’ Here lies your skill here again in Lows…by ‘Unknown’…enjoyed … Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
maybe you should have named it 'life' coz the contents actually match up with an average life an average humankind.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 2:14:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Sometimes it is good to think of off loading the baskets of burdens off your shoulders and breath the freshness in the air of your journey. Let go!