Liz Munro

Rookie (02/09/81 / Australia)

Journey - Poem by Liz Munro

I'm feeling so focused and calm today
nothing negative is gonna get in my way
my eyes are shining so bright and clear,
it feels like all my dreams, close to coming true are near.

Only i can hold myself back
if i stray off this positive track.
but there is a new me, different to the me of old,
i have started a journey - and amazed,
i follow and watch my journey unfold.
for i am going somewher i have never been,
and my mind is unlocking things previously unseen.
from negative entrapment, i am breaking free,
now is the time for discovering the true and inner me.

Focused and happy, my journey feels right,
like my spirit has grown wings, and to a higher level takes flight.
everything for me is starting to click into place,
i no longer rush life by, at such a fast pace.

For whatever life throws at me, i know i'll survive it,
and i will continue my journey, untill it reaches mortal end,
where i know on a higher plane, my journey will begin again.

14/7/04


Comments about Journey by Liz Munro

  • Gold Star - 12,987 Points Rajnish Manga (5/25/2015 11:47:00 PM)

    Looks like a message of life's journey- full of hope and optimism, grit and determination. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 539 Points Phyllis Strong (5/25/2015 6:10:00 PM)

    “Only I can hold myself back”

    You’re right Liz; the only person that can hold us back is ourselves. Continue to stay positive! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,111 Points Bill Galvin (5/25/2015 5:25:00 PM)

    Positive approach to life. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,151 Points Kim Barney (5/25/2015 3:24:00 PM)

    Such an optimistic and uplifting poem! Well deserved selection as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,658 Points Godfrey Morris (5/25/2015 9:05:00 AM)

    Awesome poem I enjoyed every line. Great read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vanessa Everts (1/6/2009 9:10:00 AM)

    thank you for this poem
    today i'm starting on my new journey, changing everything leavin all pain and sorrows behind me.
    nd your poem gave me inspiration, hope nd somehow peace within!
    I hope that my journey can be as great as yours.

    god bless ~V~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Cellmer (11/30/2005 8:41:00 AM)

    This is lovely bright write and beautiful captured thoughts with a strong spirit within, you are great writer and I really enjoyed your work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Brad (11/5/2005 2:06:00 AM)

    That was really good Liz, i enjoyed reading it.

    I hope to see more poems up in the future with the same spirit.
    Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Slimboydim . (11/1/2005 8:22:00 AM)

    Such a positive attitude, this made me want to
    travel with you. I know sometimes 'The Journey'
    is not straight forward, but i wish you well on yours.
    A great poem.

    Kindest Regards Slim. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Liz Munro (10/31/2005 11:05:00 PM)

    i hope you enjoy this poem as much as i did writing it.
    'Journey' is my personal favourite and one of my best poems
    i've written to date. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 28, 2005

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 1, 2005


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