Johnny's Gun Poem by Michael Pruchnicki

Johnny's Gun



A book we read in class one summer
when summer sun and crack of bat
distracted us from assigned reading
and the discussions we held indoors

was written about a wounded soldier
who gradually comes to realize
the extent of his injuries
and prefers death

Grim stuff for high school kids
used to running and catching
baseballs - stretching ourselves
physically and mentally

on baseball diamonds in the sun
so that confinement in a bed
for the rest of one's life
struck a chord of fear
and we would have rather died, too!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 22 March 2008

Except for the title, which is deceiving, this is a finely written piece of prose that could be expanded and enhanced extensively. I don't find anything to criticise in the writing. The message is clear; which is, by far, the most important thing. This is tho only piece of yours that I have read, I will have to read more. GW62

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Flora Gillingham 10 March 2008

Two aspects nicely worked together.

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