Jharokha Poem by ramesh rai

Jharokha

Rating: 4.3


Tanhayion me
khamoshiyon me
sahar se door
kisi veeran jangal me
meri atma
anant lamhon ko chumti hai

Jharano ka
uche parvaton se girna
phir gir kar aage badhna
phir unki kal kal dhwani
prakriti ki nistabhdhata ka bhang hona

Parvat k uche sikhar
asman ko chhune ka prayas

suraj ki pratham kiran
ghane patton ko chirti hui
dharti par girti hai
phir charo taraf
uski hi abha nazar aati hai

har manjar par
kahi n kahi thikana hota hai

Hawayen bhi kahan se aati hai
kitni thapere khati hui
kahan chali jati hai

phir main dekhta hoon
hawaon ki jhokon me
do daliyon ko jhagarte huye
jo ek chingari paida karti hai
phir pura jangal
ek samshan sa najar aata hai
jiske kabra me
uski hariyali dafan ho jaati hai

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 11 September 2013

Beautiful lines.. Jiske kabra me uski hariyali dafan ho jaati hai....Wonderful poem..Loved reading it.. Har manjar per kahin na khin thikana hota hai... Hum usse talashte rahein idhar udhar per woh hamare saamne he tha.. Loved it.

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Ramesh Rai 11 September 2013

i will add your lines for final print

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Deepak Sawhney 16 October 2013

Lovely...really enjoyed the read. Each stanza most enjoyable. Most certainly a 10/10

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 September 2013

Kya baat hai...bahut sunder rachna.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 September 2013

Bohot khoob! I enjoyd dis, my urdu is similar to yor hindi so i likd dis nice nazm.

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Yasmin Khan 13 September 2013

beautifully described emotions and feelings, in the images of Nature

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2013

Parvat k uche sikhar asman ko chhune ka prayas Peaks of mountains' relentless effort to touch the sky...Beautifully described heart's deep desire (dilka jharoka) . Thank you for expressing various aspects in beautiful Hindi.

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