Jealousy Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

Jealousy

Rating: 3.1


Green eyed monster
With sparkling emerald eyes
Lurking in your mind
Having you believe
he is on your side
A demon in disguise
Looking for a weak spot to find
to your ghats misery to bind
in your heart
to spark a burning fire
Your soul to assign
in envious desire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

To be envious is like vicious…cycle never stops… It’s a vice…kills harmony and breeds discontentment… Nicely crafted by you…thanks Ma’am 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ritty Patnaik 17 November 2009

dear milica......jealousy, envy.....the baser qualities in uswhich comes up from time to time.you have put it in beautiful way.couldn't have been better.lovely write. ritty

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Punsara Amarasinghe 17 November 2009

I have been inspired by your vivid and gracious expression...........so keep up your great ability...................God bless you!

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Apothecary Montague 18 September 2009

i could not imagine anyone expressing it better

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Romeo Della Valle 11 September 2009

Dear Milica, this poem is short but powerful, well-penned, thanks for sharing, you got my vote,10+, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

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