January Parting Poem by peter rodenby

January Parting

Rating: 5.0


I
Tried
Catching
Her tears
From sad
Pathetic eyes
But
They slowly
Trickled
Through my fingers
Dissolving the white unfeeling snow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 14 February 2006

you should try writing tanka or haiku. there is a feel of those elements in this poem.

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Solomon Brook 27 January 2006

Simply beautiful. One of a kind.

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