January Mist Poem by Sandra Fowler

January Mist

Rating: 4.9


Sometimes at night I hear small birds lament.
Dark notes that seem to second moon's descent.
Cold is the color of a deep regret,
An etude perfected by winterset.

The world was music and it turned us round.
Stirred by the subtle atmospheric sound,
You gently sketched a snowflake on my face
Which shall be mine till light has left this place.

Such solace has the power to outlast time,
To lock a small bird's elegy in rhyme.
Somewhere beyond the January mist,
The magic of our landscape still exists.

Copyright,2008, Sandra Fowler

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cyclopseven R 12 January 2008

Once upon a time, I came to peep your words. After a long time, I am back again to fill my heart with immeasurable solace gained from the mesmerizing verses. Esoteric.

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Melvina Germain 13 January 2008

You are the poetess who posseses verse perfection. Your work portrays such elegance, and beauty. What a wonderful gift you have been given. I truly enjoy reading your precious poems. Melvina

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Mary Gordley 15 January 2008

What a stunning poem this is. Thank you so much for all the wonderful poetry you write and share on this site.

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Marvin Brato 15 January 2008

Quite magical! Thanks for sharing, perfect 10.

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Goldy Locks 19 January 2008

Cringe at the rhymes, adore the eloquent style. And of course, your words, your description, your pairings, your melody. See everyone's fawning all over your delicate verse; needless to say, i haven't missed it (the subservient bootlicking) . ~xxsjg

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premji premji 07 May 2009

the soul of good men take rebirth as singing birds... now they lament to be reborn.....

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Mamta Agarwal 14 October 2008

a lovely reflective and melodious poem. winter, beginning of the year, mist, you have woven a beautiful tapestry with words.10 Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 28 September 2008

a beautiful poem on winterset and on the reflective moods it brings... 'Cold is the color of a deep regret'...good poetic line...smooth melodious write, Sandra...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

A beautiful poem with a nice ending. I love it and 10 added to it.

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Dawn Slanker 06 August 2008

Beautiful poem. I especially love the lines: 'You gently sketched a snowflake on my face/ Which shall be mine till light has left this place.' The last stanza is a stunner as well.

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Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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