Jaded Poem by Eddie Roa

Jaded

Rating: 4.5


Centuries of delight reprised
Weaving thru the statuary
Peeing Eros, spouting lion
Cold nubile maidens and
Olympians with lecher eyes

Doorway upon doorway
Leading to a gallery then another
Daylight to twilight
Midnight to dawn
Oh what irksome ennui!

You awe at wonders only once
Not felt if all over again
First gladiator kill gives the most thrill
The first kiss divine, then just lust
A debut is grand, what’s next a parody

A continuum of sameness
A season of repeats
A looped tape of events
An echo playing pong
God stammering

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 11 February 2009

You make a good point. Your ending is very interesting.

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Gil Gregorio 08 February 2009

Your poetry style reminds of Homer and Shakepeare.... intriguing really.

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Kite Remedy 01 February 2009

you really optimize the use of imagery and Greek term here too, definitely a fine piece..

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Fiona Davidson 27 January 2009

So many images here Ediie makes it a wonderful read...thank you...Fi

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Leslie Ching 26 January 2009

you can even bring a chuckle from greek mythology: 'Peeing Eros' gives the reader quite an image...lc

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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