Jack And The Candlestick Rewrite Poem by Ramona Thompson

Jack And The Candlestick Rewrite



Jack be nimble
Jack be quick
Jack jump over the candlestick

Original Mother Goose Song above

My rewrite of the above below

Jack, let me put this to you simple
Jack, I want you out quick
'Cause Jack, this lady don't waste her time
Playing around with a man whose only got a 2 inch candlestick

2009 Ramona Thompson

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