(j) 4 (General) An Intense Desire Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(j) 4 (General) An Intense Desire

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I have this intense desire
To sing the song of the waves
As they crash into the rocks
Splashing foam into my caves

Walk barefoot on the sand
Let the rolling water kiss my feet
Wash away all that I am
Dancing to its beat

Swim out deep in the ocean
Carrying nothing, bare in the skin
Shedding all the layers
Washing away the sins

Getting lost in your solitude
Vastness envelops and I get submerged
No longer do I know who I am
And with you I get merged

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 05 February 2007

The words an' imagery here create thier own ocean.......well pennedTO

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Ernestine Northover 31 January 2007

This reads like bliss TO. lovely words and images here for calming the mind. Love and hugs Erenstine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 January 2007

Awesome imagework here, T.O....We just can't seem to tpull you away from the water these days, my dear....Beginning to thinkTranquil Ocean, may in fact, in truth, be 'Tranquil Mermaid'...SPLENDID CRAFTSMANSHIP, AS CAN ALWAYS BE EXPECTED FROM YOU... FJR... 2/1/7

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