(j) 3 (General) When We Dream.... Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(j) 3 (General) When We Dream....

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When we sleep, when we dream...
We can be anything that we want
Deep and inner longing manifesting into a form...

Part of the self leaves the body when we sleep...
It becomes what we want to be
Hidden desires buried inside...out they creep

I'm the moon, everything glistens and shimmers in my light...
Playing and flirting through the clouds
My reflection in still water is the most beautiful sight...

I'm the wave surging out in the deep sea...
A giant leap and then merging back
Sometimes crashing, sometimes tranquil...always thirsty

I'm the cloud made of white whipped cream...
Wandering over Angkor, Luxor or Memphis
Each day moving to a new place of my dream...

I'm a dust particle floating in the will of the air...
That no one can see but can generate a bout of sneeze
I'm here, I'm there....I'm everywhere...

I'm a child again looking at everything with a glee...
Thirst to learn, thirst to dance
Breaking out in a gurgling laughter looking up at you innocently...

I'm the scarlet rose as dark as wine...
Each peatal as it unfolds revealing a hidden pearl
When all petals drop...become a field of grapewine

I'm the gnome with a long nose in the Faraway Tree...
Get lost in the various lands that anchor on the top
Throwing water on any intruder that comes to visit me...

So every human streams out in the nights....
Some do it even in the day to escape
They just do it in different lights...

When we sleep, when we dream...
You can be anything that you want
Deep and inner longing manifesting into a form....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 September 2006

T. O....A BEAUTIFULY AMOROUS PIECE OF VERSE.....STERLING IMAGERY.YOU HAVE A DARTING TALENT FOR REACHING OUT & TAKING IN YOUR READER, UNSUSPECTINGLY THROUGH GRADUATING INTENSITY. SOLIDK, T.O.''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ruby Root 13 September 2006

What a beautiful poem Tranquil. I really loved it. It very different. Take care.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 22 September 2006

Splendid Tranquil! Dreams go beyond the barriers? No limits and restrictions.

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 September 2006

this is quite true.. sure our dreams let us transcend the spatial n the temporal boundaries... dreaming n daydreaming are coping mechanisms... i wonder how v wud live if we cudnt dream..it is a medium thru which v can 'escape' the everyday reality...n seek refuge in it n recharge our batteries so to say! ! ... :)

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Preeti - is here! 14 September 2006

this ones lovely, and so true, dreams and being able to be who you want to be is the best part about sleeping! Preets PS - No Cheesy comment this time: P

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Nalini Hebbar 13 September 2006

TO...nice one...you let your imagination go places in this one...well done...love...nalini

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Geoff Warden 13 September 2006

T.O. a beautiful poem of verse........and as Tranquil to read as oceans calm.....

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