Its Emptiness Poem by Dorsey Baker

Its Emptiness

Rating: 5.0


Its emptiness
that makes the rabbit
fall over dead
not the bullet thats
in his head
his courage denies him defeat
denies him his hunger
when he has nothing to eat
Its emptiness
that makes the hawk
give up the fight
refusing to let his eyes
see the colors of black
and white
Its emptiness
that has the power to kill
making the strongest spirit
bow to its will!

Sunday, November 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 29 November 2015

Same is applicable to life of a person. An empty mind is called a devil's workshop and it's condition becomes worse than death. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Shakil Ahmed 29 November 2015

Its emptiness that makes the rabbit fall over dead not the bullet thats in his head- -it's equally true to the case of human being, well penned poem, thanks

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