! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Itill Exhaled -“inspired By Viola’s Anticipation” Poem by Rehan Hyder

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Itill Exhaled -“inspired By Viola’s Anticipation”

Rating: 5.0


The lingo of “hope” I spoke-
“Certainty” hope’s bonded fettered slave
Tongue rolled out sun
Cleaving clouds of doubts
I spoke hope; retrieval whence blasphemous-
A catharsis of uncertainty
I spoke of “you” in a monosyllable of “us”
I knew of tremors, tsunamis and jolts
But I said “us” alive, awake to
undoable [heady damage]

I inhaled you as I whispered……. “hope”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I inhaled you as I whispered……. “hope”.............10++++

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Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

Poem is a union of souls pair, a poem of hope and obtaining happiness in love, only by deeply understanding and knowledge of the phenomenon itself. The conceptual metaphor: ''Tongue rolled out sun/Cleaving clouds of doubts ''and cognitive metaphor: ''I spoke of “you” in a monosyllable of “us” '' are very suggestive in this regard.10++

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Viola Grey 16 May 2009

what hope can come of words held fast upon the tongue set them free and let be whatever will be now, see what you started :) ...thanks for the kind words my friend.

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