hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 43,409 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

It Will Be Unfair - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

To live in isolation and far
The bond needs closeness
To bring happiness on face

We are human animal
Can’t put show as dismal
We need to survive and stay
Life is not meant to be thrown away

We shall continue to thrive
For all human beings and live
In harmony with peace
So the life can be at ease

What do we need now?
The thought to lead and how
It is in our hand
To make foes or friends

Live in circle
To avoid troubles
With less struggle
To avoid rule of jungles


Comments about It Will Be Unfair by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/18/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem especially for todays situations.. Live in circle to avoid troubles with less struggle to avoid rule of jungles..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 43,409 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 11:05:00 PM)

    Spoken like a true wise man

    Ja'Quan LaBenne20 minutes ago
    Hasmukh, you're an everflowing spigot of frosted flakes, I tell you.
    Comment 0
    Life is unfair (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,409 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 11:05:00 PM)

    Furious Fowl24 minutes ago
    One must lead
    Make foes
    Be a jungle person.
    Comment 0
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,409 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Darlene Dai'Re26 minutes ago
    nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,409 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 11:03:00 PM)

    It will be unfair
    To live in isolation and far (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013


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