It Was You.. Poem by Bojoy Barredo

It Was You..

Rating: 5.0


I thought of something, I can't define
I was lonely neither not fine
I get up to swallow my pride
It's you who made me cry...

I thought of something, I really can't define
I was happy when you smile
Even the slightest effort, I sight
It's you who made me feel right...

I open up my eyes with you on my side
I was touched when you whisper 'mine'
When you say come and hug me, made me try
I think it's you whom I can define.

Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 04 July 2017

Nicely done. Smooth and flowing, yet complex enough to invite contemplation.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2016

I was touched when you whisper 'mine' these are beautiful sentiments of love and affection and passion. thank you dear poet.

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Bojoy Barredo 30 August 2016

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much sir :) :) :) I feel great and motivated to write more poems..

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 August 2016

To swallow up my pride. Thanks for sharing.

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Bojoy Barredo 30 August 2016

Welcome sir... :) :) Rather, thank you so much for appreciating my masterpiece :) :)

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