It Was Summer Poem by REETESSH SABRR

It Was Summer

Rating: 5.0


It was summer when we departed,
Hope this winter we shall again meet
And see that how much cold it is,
when two friends will share a warm breath

I penned a song, once back a long
Wish with a sure that preserved you have
The blitz in eyes there are yours
so I can swear that I am suave

As dab you do on heartly pains
nobody can guess what a friend gains

But to win something we have a lot to lose
That's the way that frienship goes...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aashish Ameya 09 August 2008

this one is really nice.....

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Anjali Sinha 26 August 2008

But to win something we have a lot to lose That's the way that frienship goes... yes very true +10 regards anjali

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Deepti Agarwal 28 August 2008

last verse is wonderful.... yes indeed u r ansolutely right over there..

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Anand Madhukar 11 September 2009

A nice and simple write that touches the heart.

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Nihar ... 26 August 2009

10+ for sharing this poem with all

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 September 2008

10 for this nice poem. Love it.

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Richa Dhodi 29 September 2008

'But to win something we have a lot to lose That's the way that frienship goes... ' Quite true... nice poem. keep writing

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Shruti Modi 04 September 2008

its all abt friendship, love, departing and wait... its from ur heart..its lovely

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