It Was My Time Poem by Lee Degnan
It Was My Time
ears ringing
it's all drowned out anyway
from the hum of my car
as it accelerates,
to the constant
playback
of the last time we spoke
eyes stinging
like salt in a wound
I can't see the road because
tears do that I guess
yet I push my car
to go faster
salvation
by racing away from reality
heart leaping
as all shuts down around me
I'm no longer gripping the wheel
or this life
I've wanted done
closure
I've so sought, so is found
This is so powerful and so sad at the same time Well projected Love duncan X
I've wanted done closure, great line.............nice poem............10
I admire gifted poets like you who can use words (effortless) to show the intensity of one's emotion when fueled by painful memory. You're certainly my favorite Lee.
very simple but well penned, Lee..another great works of yours.. love and hugs, Meggie
Powerfully stunning piece, young lady...You could feel the travestic build-up as it was so very well architected by you...as well as the mellifluous structure that cascaded ssmoothly throughout...Another gem, my friend! ~ ~ ~
Really heartful personally as it happens to everybody when passiong through the eternal stream, beautiful penning with ingenuity, i do appreciate
This poem touched me so much when I first read it. There are different ways to interpret it, and yet, I have the strange feeling that everyone who has read this poem understands it and relates to it as if it were their own experience. Very well written. Be proud of it. -Jade
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 9:55:34 PM # 1.0.0.1119
so real and frightening. good poem.