It Shows, When In Love. Poem by Fahim Sayed

It Shows, When In Love.

Rating: 5.0


A little bit of you, a little bit of me
Some sort of bond, or chemistry.

A look in an eye, a deep sigh
Grounded, but still flying high

Caring words and a sweet talk,
Thousands phrases with lips locked.

A light hug and a small kiss,
Memorable moment, to cherish

The past, the present, and the future,
Like minds, but different culture.

Try; but it won’t be enough,
It shows, when in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 16 August 2008

it shows that love has no boundaries regardless of race, religion or distance..... simple remarkable piece. Thanks

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Shalini Kts 17 August 2008

nice love poem.... when in love you forget yourself....................god bless you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 August 2008

i stumbled and fell, but crawled back and standing upright......to fall again.thanks for the piece bro.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 17 August 2008

lovely love poem, thanks for shraing

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Shrishti J 17 August 2008

cute and simple; beatiful and lovely :)

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Gohar Sana 30 August 2008

nice really nice. good work

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Amie-Lee ...... 20 August 2008

I really like this poem. Good work, keep it up: -)

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Mark Nwagwu 18 August 2008

a thousand phrases with lips locked eye beholding eye lost in the other breathe in breathe out fill me up leave me gasping where there're no spaces left your bouncing and romping my life now you know I love you Fahim, forgive me - your write is so simple and angelic it provoked some thoughts in me urging me to let them out. mark

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 August 2008

yet love when scintillating by the sizzling mist of love over the lips, the thirst of sand as when quenched by the drizzles of rain...............wonderful imagery of love, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Cyclopseven R 18 August 2008

Honeyed very well...such a sweetness. Touched the core of human love. God Bless.

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