SALINI NAIR

Bronze Star - 6,475 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

It's safe there


There in the corner weapons speak
Curse fumigates
Rapes hassles
Murder plots
Slavery sobs
Orphanage mount
Sickness paradox
Oh! This earth is a hell

In these shadows a safe hand emerged
Lovely and formless all the way
It's the way to heavenly shore
There the mourn never tease or die
After death shelter will be arrogant
Be a soul and shed this swathe

Pain never feels in that float
It just exists in this globe
Form creates all hazards
Invisible to naked sense
But protected from heavenly side
There the safety exists nowadays

Never mourn for all lost
Remember they are in safe side
In this hell we are about to suffer
When we mourn for our loss
They won't suffer in that paradise
As they are formless and safe there

We can hurt a figure anyway
But can never harm the divine soul
If this world is formless
Then here harmonize all souls
Parity will be the output
Death the answer of safety! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2014

Topic of this poem: death


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Comments about this poem (It's safe there by SALINI NAIR )

  • Gold Star - 22,142 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/4/2014 7:28:00 AM)

    Safety is a dream, let us find it in the heavens for our souls. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2014 9:34:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Salini. We feel safe when we are in heaven and this earth looks like hell, where we have to suffer a lot. One thing is sure, that nothing can touch the divine soul whether we are in heaven or hell.
    Loved the way you explained.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,611 Points Amitava Sur (8/1/2014 3:47:00 PM)

    Loved your imagination backed up with a logical concept that soul is a shapeless form, can't be hurt physically. very true and appreciated it.
    Only one thing I have a doubt within that since the soul is with all feelings and sensations, how it will withstand these unjust? ?
    But never the less, it's a fantastic concept, I loved it Salini. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,237 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/31/2014 6:44:00 AM)

    Of course we could feel safe in heaven in the context of today's world where everything looks scary...............
    a good concept crafted in a very subtle manner................. (Report) Reply

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