It's Right Poem by Neela Nath Das

It's Right

Rating: 5.0


It's right that cloud can't
do any live-show like human heart
Of love or anything near to love.
Abstract needs concrete to
Keep legs fixed,
And to bloom a flower,
A butterfly must go on
A morning tour.
To quench her thirst
Nature too seeks some ways.
The moon, the sun, trees and plants,
Are only traps to catch a mind.
If they work, be bold and walk
Or stride on the path of love.
But, remember any waning moon,
Can never run any dream with
Thought that's fully blue!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 17 July 2014

Beautiful poem Neela. One has to be bold on path of love. Beautiful imagery you have brought through this poem. Loved it.

0 0 Reply
Tribhawan Kaul 17 July 2014

One has to be brave and bold in love. Very nice.

0 0 Reply
Chuy Amante 16 July 2014

I suspicion that butterfly on tour is you! Beautifully fluttering gracefully thru all that you think, say and do I like it Neela! 11/10

0 0 Reply
* Sunprincess * 15 July 2014

......beautiful poem....a butterfly is powerless against the charms of a beautiful fragrant flower...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success