It's Refreshing To See Discovery Displayed Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

It's Refreshing To See Discovery Displayed



It's refreshing to see discovery displayed,
For the first time in the eyes of others.
It's refreshing to see those moments,
When unexpected acceptance comes.
And undone becomes a mystery revealed.

Like someone being surprised without hint or clue.
It's refreshing to see discovery displayed like that.
It's refreshing when done to someone to show,
Appreciation for that which one does to do.
And to do with an independence that is dependable.

It's refreshing to see discovered independence like that.
With a witnessing of it displayed unexpectedly,
To then show appreciation and acceptance...
For a deed one does to believe it is being perceived,
Unreaveled and not expecting what's done to be noticed.

It's refreshing to see discovery displayed,
For the first time in the eyes of others.
It's refreshing to see those moments,
When unexpected acceptance comes.
And undone becomes a mystery revealed.

It's refreshing to see discovery displayed,
When unexpected acceptance is shown...
With a doing done for another,
To show appreciation for deeds done...
Someone does to do with no expectations.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ajay Srivastava 14 September 2013

One can not hold good deed in hiding. Good deed always refreshing Need no display, always remain in heart. It's refreshing to display in your mind & spread them.

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