. It's Over... (Funny) Poem by Eyan Desir

it`s over, , don`t cry.. it`s over, , but there is a chance.. it`s over, , but its not the end of life.. so amazing lovely sadly piece.. thank you for sharing.. hazem al..

substantial write of dislike..expressed well..nice rhymes...

An angry write about a love that has ended in a bitter way, thanks 10 Lynda xx

sure it touches when the one you love leaves you and dates with the other mate. love has its own pillars and needs condusive situation to grow deep. When a lover has a lover he or never know who a good and the real lover is but when he or she has know someone around regrates and know who the best and real lover was. love shifts but true love never end. the sentences I hate your sorry lines And the stupid lies. this give how you are tired of her naggings. good work, whana read more. NB.Drop your comment on my poem 'deep in the soul or just on the bank. if you get a chance. I appriciate

This is great.. I recently went through something similar so i know how it feels

great thought, keep up da good work...............it's over, hurt's alot but it okay be strong, there's a time u will not braek ur heart no more.there's r good memories nd bad memories u know it how life is......peace out! ! !

OK! This one is difficult because when we hold someone as 'special' and they don't live up to our ideals of them, they break our hearts. There is a quote I like by Thomas Jefferson, 'Honesty is the first chapter in the book of Wisdom.' If everyone strived to be the best they can be to one another, less heartache. Deceit is poison to a relationship.

aww i know how it feels to have ur heart broken: (

this is well presented..it's very impressive..tho this is nicely done ian, but the thought breaks my heart..i don't want the word 'goodbye' coz it means tears.hu pa mu ti? ...naizxenia..

Hi Eyan! Another beautifully written piece. Well done! ! Saying it's over is easier said then done, but beautifully written none the less.