Ray Hansell

Rookie - 162 Points (New Jersey)

It's Good It Didn't Show Poem by Ray Hansell


You thought about it for a while
You weren't sure if you should
The more you thought about it
The more you thought you could

He was someone special
You didn't want to lose
Now it was decision time
So now you had to chose

The more you thought about it
The more you felt you shouldn't
The longer the thoughts filled your head
You were convinced now you couldn't

It's good you never said a word
It's good he didn't know
It's good the love you felt inside
Was love you didn't let show


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Submitted: Saturday, July 27, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013
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  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (7/27/2013 9:40:00 PM)

    It sounds like restraint is a virtue in this one. Sometimes that's true love, to do the right thing. I like your rhyming cadence. (Report) Reply

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