It's Been A Long Time Poem by yada yada yada

It's Been A Long Time

Rating: 5.0


I still feel for you the way the waves feel for the beach they so desperately wish to reach.

Thursday, February 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,love,time,waves,wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2017

the waves feel for the beach beautiful. beautiful....... in a single line u convey a lot....... beach and the shore, , , , , , , the longings.......wonderful. you have such a wonderful poetic mind...... write more and present........ thank you for your poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 24 February 2017

Beautiful depiction of the attention of love nicely encapsulated with insight. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing Rima.

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Mj Lemon 23 February 2017

Wonderful imagery....sublime and nuanced emotions....another great work. And welcome to PH!

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